Untitled Poem

Thursday, October 22

I just wanted to share a poem written by my husband.. Just an ordinary poem, maybe you'll notice some grammatical errors and mistakes but still this is very special for me, of course!! This was given to me by my hubby when we had a fight during our younger days and might be as simple as it is yet it made me cry & love him more..

By: Jim Daryl
Composed: October 20, 2007



My mom gave birth to me, everybody knows that.
Not my father, not my brother and not my relatives,
just my mom.
But I want to ask this,
who's the one who making me stay alive
And who's the one helping and teaching me how to live?
It's not my mom, not my father, not my brother
but YOU my wife.
I don't know how you make all this.
Maybe that's the power of love.
Everybody saying thank you?!
Not enough to tell you that
I'm really happy you came in my life...



3 comments:

pelangi anak said...

This is a special and lovely poem for beloved wife. What a perfect husband! How lucky you are!

zukirin said...

lol bkit mu post yn? hehe kw tlga..thankz po saulo mu p pala yan..hehe i love you po mama q..mwaahuugzz

lina@happy family said...

Meri, it's a beautiful poem. Actually, last Friday my hubby gave me a poem, too...
We're lucky women, right?

Thursday, October 22

Untitled Poem

Posted by iya at 7:13 PM
I just wanted to share a poem written by my husband.. Just an ordinary poem, maybe you'll notice some grammatical errors and mistakes but still this is very special for me, of course!! This was given to me by my hubby when we had a fight during our younger days and might be as simple as it is yet it made me cry & love him more..

By: Jim Daryl
Composed: October 20, 2007



My mom gave birth to me, everybody knows that.
Not my father, not my brother and not my relatives,
just my mom.
But I want to ask this,
who's the one who making me stay alive
And who's the one helping and teaching me how to live?
It's not my mom, not my father, not my brother
but YOU my wife.
I don't know how you make all this.
Maybe that's the power of love.
Everybody saying thank you?!
Not enough to tell you that
I'm really happy you came in my life...



3 comments on "Untitled Poem"

pelangi anak on October 22, 2009 at 9:11 PM said...

This is a special and lovely poem for beloved wife. What a perfect husband! How lucky you are!

zukirin on October 23, 2009 at 2:05 AM said...

lol bkit mu post yn? hehe kw tlga..thankz po saulo mu p pala yan..hehe i love you po mama q..mwaahuugzz

lina@happy family on October 24, 2009 at 7:06 AM said...

Meri, it's a beautiful poem. Actually, last Friday my hubby gave me a poem, too...
We're lucky women, right?

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